目 录

第一部分　题型概述

第一节　读后续写概况 ...............................................................................2

第二节　读后续写评分标准（浙江新高考卷）................................................2

第三节　读后续写评分标准（全国新高考卷）................................................3

第二部分　遣词造句

读后续写常用句法与词法 ................................................ 8

第一章

第一节　动词时态......................................................................................8

1　过去进行时...........................................................................................8

2　过去完成时...........................................................................................9

3　过去完成进行时.....................................................................................9

第二节　无灵主语（物作主语）...................................................................10

第三节　非谓语..........................................................................................10

1　doing/ done............................................................................................11

2　having done...........................................................................................11

3　with的复合结构....................................................................................12

第四节　从句.............................................................................................12

1　定语从句...............................................................................................12

2　名词性从句...........................................................................................13

3　状语从句...............................................................................................14

第五节　形容词（短语）作状语...................................................................14

第六节　强调句..........................................................................................15

第七节　倒装句..........................................................................................15

1　完全倒装...............................................................................................15

2　部分倒装...............................................................................................16

3　形式倒装...............................................................................................16

读后续写五类描写 ........................................................ 17

第二章

第一节　动作描写......................................................................................17

1　动作描写思路........................................................................................17

方法一：构造“动作链”....................................................................17

方法二：编织动作“面”....................................................................20

2　动作描写语料........................................................................................21

第二节　心理描写......................................................................................29

1　“回忆”...............................................................................................30

2　“灵感”...............................................................................................30

3　“决心”...............................................................................................31

4　“后悔”...............................................................................................31

5　“托物言志”........................................................................................32

第三节　情绪描写......................................................................................32

1　内层（“直抒胸臆”）...........................................................................32

（1）形容词句式................................................................................33

（2）名词句式...................................................................................33

2　表层（“眉目传情”）...........................................................................37

3　外层（“寄情于景”）...........................................................................37

4　情绪描写语料........................................................................................37

第四节　环境描写......................................................................................44

1　地点方位的描写.....................................................................................44

2　环境的直接描写.....................................................................................45

（1）景/物描写.................................................................................45

（2）天气描写...................................................................................46

（3）气氛描写...................................................................................46

（4）环境聚焦...................................................................................47

（5）环境比喻...................................................................................47

（6）环境幕布...................................................................................48

3　用环境衬托人物.....................................................................................48

（1）正衬..........................................................................................48

（2）反衬..........................................................................................48

（3）衬托的正反互用.........................................................................50

第五节　语言描写......................................................................................50

1　口语中的简单句.....................................................................................50

2　正确使用标点符号.................................................................................50

（1）说话人+说话内容......................................................................50

（2）说话内容+说话人......................................................................51

（3）说话内容+说话人+说话内容.....................................................51

3　避免重复使用say...................................................................................51

4　用对话推动情节发展..............................................................................53

第三部分　谋篇布局

读后续写情节素描 ........................................................ 56

第一章

第一节　“负—转—正”的情节轮廓.............................................................56

1　“矛盾（负）”决定了故事的起点..........................................................56

2　“转折（转）”决定了高潮的展开..........................................................56

3　“结局（正）”决定了故事的终点..........................................................56

“正能量”的结局..............................................................................56

“正能量”不等于“皆大欢喜”..........................................................57

“结局”不等于“结尾”....................................................................57

4　用“负—转—正”标记故事轮廓.............................................................58

“负—转—正”..................................................................................58

“负—转—负—转—正”....................................................................62

“正—转—负—转—正”....................................................................64

“双线情节”.....................................................................................65

第二节　段首提示句决定情节走向................................................................67

第三节　伏笔与铺垫...................................................................................69

模块化“微情节” ........................................................ 73

第二章

第一节　“微情节”的展开..........................................................................73

1　描写对象的切换.....................................................................................73

（1）“独角戏”和“唱双簧”............................................................73

（2）“群戏”...................................................................................74

2　描写细节的切换.....................................................................................74

3　长短句的切换........................................................................................75

4　叙事节奏的切换.....................................................................................75

5　逻辑链的构建........................................................................................76

第二节　微情节之“激化矛盾”...................................................................76

1　愈演愈烈...............................................................................................76

2　希望渐微...............................................................................................78

3　食不知味...............................................................................................80

4　回忆如潮...............................................................................................81

（1）刺激→回忆................................................................................81

（2）回忆→动作................................................................................82

5　悔不当初...............................................................................................83

6　度日如年...............................................................................................85

第三节　微情节之“解决矛盾”...................................................................85

1　灵光一闪...............................................................................................85

2　发奋图强...............................................................................................88

3　真情感化...............................................................................................90

4　按部就班...............................................................................................91

5　伏笔发酵...............................................................................................94

6　机缘巧合...............................................................................................97

第四节　微情节之“正向结局”...................................................................98

1　喜出望外...............................................................................................99

2　死里逃生...............................................................................................100

第五节　微情节之“收尾点睛”...................................................................100

1　细节呼应...............................................................................................100

2　主题议论...............................................................................................103

3　寄情于景...............................................................................................104

4　喃喃自语...............................................................................................106

5　时光荏苒...............................................................................................106

第四部分　融会贯通

三大主题语境下的续写模式探索 ....................................... 110

第一章

第一节　人与自然......................................................................................110

第二节　人与社会......................................................................................115

第三节　人与自我......................................................................................117

篇章训练 ................................................................... 120

第二章

1　“Poppy的新伙伴”..............................................................................120

2　“寒酸的礼物”.....................................................................................122

3　“世界和平”........................................................................................124

4　“营救Bosco”.....................................................................................126

5　“现在几点”........................................................................................128

6　“圣诞节护士站”.................................................................................130

7　“可疑的箱子”.....................................................................................132

8　“女儿的电话”.....................................................................................134

9　“标枪少年”........................................................................................136

10　“圣诞老人存在吗”............................................................................138

11　“代课老师”......................................................................................140

12　“母亲节”..........................................................................................142

13　“名画”.............................................................................................144

14　“诚实的挑夫”...................................................................................146

参考答案....................................................................................................148